爱华网高考短文改错 1
2011年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试(浙江卷)
I was playing at my cousin house. Since his family was rich than mine, he had more toys than I did. There was one on particular I’d always wanted. I put into my pocket when he wasn’t looking. I guessed, even at that age, I would never be able to enjoy to playing with the toy or faced my cousin again; I would always know I’d done something wrong. Late on, my aunt drove me home. When she dropped me off, I pulled out the toy slow and gave it back. She knows what had happened, but she thanked me and ever mentioned it again.
第一节（10分，每小题1分）
1.cousin – cousin’s 2. rich – richer 3.on --- in 4.put ---put it/that 5. enjoy to --- enjoy
6.faced --- face 7. Late --- Later 8.slow --- slowly 9. knows --- knew 10. ever --- never
高考短文改错 2
2011年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试(辽宁卷)
In early January this year, the rate of UFO reports was steady ,around three per
week. When, however, on Monday, January 16, a science fiction film about visitors from outer space was shown on television ,there was the immediate increase in reports of sightings from all parts of the States. The commanding officer ,Wayne Tyler ,who directly responsible for the study all such reports ,decided to making his findings known. They wrote an article ,which said that all UFO reports could be explained for quite naturally by aircraft movements. Follow this explanation ,there was a rapid drop in the number of reported sightings ,because the rate remainded above the previous level.
注：文章红色部分为需要修改的地方！
第1个考查 主谓一致，were—was;
第2个考查 名词单复数 weeks--week
第3个考查 介词从外面来，介词应该用from.
第4个考查冠词 the--a
第5个考查非限制性定语从句 注意be responsible for 表示对什么负责。who后加 was或is 第6个考查非谓语 decide to do sth. making—make
第7个考查代词 指代前面Wayne Tyler，因此用They--He。
第8个考查动词explain是及物动词，不需要介词。去掉for
第9个考查非谓语做状语用follow---following.
第10个考查连词 because 表示原因，根据上文应该是表示转折关系的连词。
because---although/though/but/yet
高考短文改错3
2011年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试(陕西卷)
Last Sunday morning，when l was having a walk in the park near my home，I came across a crew make a new film with one of my favourite actor．I didn’t have my camera with me at that time，．Unfortunately，by the time I got back，they have finished the scene and the actor couldn’t be seen everywhere．I was really disappointing and about to leave when he walked out a building．He was right there in the front of me! I couldn’t believe my luck--not only did I had my photo taken with him， but he signed his name on my shirt!
答案：
Last Sunday morning，when l was having a walk in the park near my home，I came I didn’t have my camera making actors
with me at that time，?．Unfortunately，by the time I got so／and it
back，the actor couldn’t be seen I was really had anywhere ?a building．He was right there in disappointed of front of me! I couldn’t believe my luck，
have
but he signed his name on my shirt!
高考短文改错 4
2011高考英语试题（新课标卷）
My summer travel started terribly .I was at the Shanghai Railway Station buy a ticket to Hang Zhou. I was going to visit a friend here and after that I would go to Xiamen for long holiday. I bought my ticket but turned around to pick up my bag from the floor and then I realized that someone had stolen it. Luckily I had all my money on my pocket, but the only clothes I had was those I had on. It felt very strange to travel without any luggages. When I finally arrived at my friend he lent to me lots of clothes. I feel very happy that I could change my clothes at last.
答案：
My summer travel started terribly.I was at the Shanghai Railway Station buying
Ticket to HangZhou.I was going to visit a friend and after that I would go to
there
Xiamen for ∧long holiday.I bought my ticket turned around to pick up my bag
a and
from the floor and then I realized that someone had stolen it. Luckily I had all my
money my pocket, but the only clothes I had those I had on. It felt very
in were
strange to travel without any . When I finally arrived at my he lent
luggage friend’s lots of clothes. I very happy that I could change my clothes at last. Felt
高考短文改错 5
2012年浙江高考英语试题
Two years before, I traveled to Brazil and I rented for a car. Unfortunate, I had an accident and
hit another car, and I needed to stay in a hospital for at least two week. 1 called my parents, so I did not tell them what had happened. I knew that they will be worried about myself because I
was so farther away, and that my mother would not sleep if she knew. Therefore, I told them
interested stories and how I was enjoying Brazil As a result, nobody knew truth. I still think that
it was the right thing to do.
第一节 短文改错
Two years , I traveled to Brazil and I rented a car. , I had an accident and
ago 去掉 Unfortunately hit another car, and I needed to stay in a hospital for at least two . 1 called my parents, I did weeks but not tell them what had happened. I knew that they be worried about because I
would me was so away, and that my mother would not sleep if she knew. Therefore, I told them
far
stories and how I was enjoying Brazil. As a result, nobody knew∧ truth. I still think that interesting the
it was the right thing to do.
高考短文改错 6
2012年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试(辽宁卷)
Dear Diana,
Thank you for the lovely day we have with you. It was so kind for you to let us bring Anne’s friend, Gina. Unfortunate, the only problem was the journey home. There had been a terrible accident on through highway and, for a result, there was a long line of traffic for at least six mile. In the end, we drove to the service station and waited there unless the road was clear. In the car park here Gina nearly got knocked over as a car drove out too quickly from behind a lorry. They finally dropped Gina off at her parents’ and made our own way to home.
Much love
Fiona
答案：
Dear Diana,
Thank you for the lovely day we with you. It was so kind you to let us bring
had of
Anne’s friend, Gina. , the only problem was the journey home. There had
Unfortunately
been a terrible accident on through highway and, a result, there was a long line of
as
traffic for at least six . In the end, we drove to the service station and waited there miles the road was clear. In the car parkGina nearly got knocked over as ∧ car until/till there a drove out too quickly from behind a lorry. finally dropped Gina off at her parents’ We and made our own way home.
去掉
高考短文改错7
2012全国英语高考真题 陕西卷
My father and I stayed at the South Lake Hotel for a week when we visit Beijing last month. It is in the downtown area, but it is easy to go to anywhere from the hotel by public transport .We lived in a comfortably double-room with a big bath. What I liked best were the free high-speed Internet connection in the room. I checked my email messages every day. I also shared for my friends many photos taking in Beijing. The food was wonderful with reasonable prices, and we enjoyed several local
dish.
It is such great hotel that I would recommend it to any friend of me who is going to Beijing.
答案：1.visit----visited 2.but----so/and 3.go to---to去掉 4.comfortably----comfortable
5.were---was 6.for---with 7.taking---take 8.dish---dishes 9.such后加a 10.me---mine.
高考短文改错 8
2012年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试(新课标)
I learned early in life that I had to be more patient and little aggressive. From
the time I was about four until I was about six, I destroyed each of my toy. I
was happy when the toys worked, but when things did wrong, I got angry and
broke it. For a while parents bought me new toys. But before long they began
to see which was happening. When I tear apart my fifth birthday toy train, my
father said, "That's it. No more toys to you." My punishment lasted a year.
Meanwhile, I found out that with more patience I must make my toys to last.
My attitude changed from then on.
答案：
第一行：因为与more patient对应，little要改为less
第二行：each of 后面要用可数名词复数toy要改为toys
第三行：do sb. Wrong意思为冤枉某人，不符合句意。改为go wrong或过去时went wrong
意思是“出问题”，“出毛病”符合句意。
第四行：与toys对应，故it要改为复数them。Parents指代不明，所以要加上my。 第五行：由句意“发生了什么事”，可知which哪个不对，应该为what。由后文said可知
tear要用过去式tore。
第六行：为某人买玩具应该用for而不是to。
第七行：由found out that with patience可知must语气太强，应该为could或might。
高考短文改错 9
2013年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试（四川卷）
Today we had a chemistry test. I found the test difficulty, but I tried hardly to do it. Suddenly Mary, my best friend, asking me to let her to copy my answers. After think for some time, I let her copy my answers. But after the test, all of us were called to the teacher’s office. The teacher was angry because we had same answers in the tests. We were warned not to cheat again so she would need to see our parents. I was very upset. I didn’t cheat. I was just helping a friend. Why does she punish me?
答案：1.difficult----difficulty.2.hardly---hard 3.asking---asked 4.to copy 去掉to
5.think---thinking 6.all---both
7.same前加the 8.tests---test 9.so---or 10.does---did
高考短文改错 10
2013年浙江省高考英语试卷真题
Dear Diary,
Here I am in the middle of a city, 350 miles far away from our farmhouse. Do you want to know why we move last week? Dad lost his job and as Mom explained, ―He was lucky to find other
one.‖ His new job meant I had to say goodbye to my classmate, my school, or just everything else I love in the world. To make matters bad, now I have to share a room with my younger sister, Maggie. Tomorrow is first day of school. I am awfully tiring, but I know I will never fall sleep.
Good night and remember, you, dear diary, is my only souvenir from my past life and my only friend.
Yours,
Rosemary
答案：
Dear Diary, last week? Dad lost his job and as Mom explained, ―He was lucky to fi moved another one.‖ His new job meant I had to say goodbye to my classmates and
worse
Maggie. Tomorrow is∧ the/my tired asleep Good night and remember, you, dear diary, my only souvenir from my past life and my only friend. are
Yours,
Rosemary
高考短文改错 11
2013年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试(辽宁卷)
Mr. Johnson is a hardworking teacher. Every day, he spends too much time with his work. With little sleep and hardly any break, so he works from morning till night. Hard work have made him very ill. ―He has ruined his healthy. We are worried about him.‖ That is which other teachers say.
Yesterday afternoon. I paid visit to Mr. Johnson. I was eager to see him, but outside her room I stopped. I had to calm myself down. Quietly I step into the room. I saw him lying in bed, looking at some of the picture we had taken together. I understood that he missed us just as many as we missed him.
答案：1.with—on 2.so去掉 3.have—has 4.healthy—health 5.which---what
6.visit前加a 7.her---his 8.step—stepped 9.picture---pictures 10.many—much
高考短文改错 12
2013年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试（陕西）
My grandfather and I enjoy fishing.
One Sunday morning we go fishing at a lake. We took ours fishing poles and headed for the lake. As soon as we arrived, so we dropped the lines into the water. Before waiting for about half an hour, I was beginning to get impatiently. I wanted to give up, and my grandfather told me to wait a little longer. Finally, there were a sudden pull at the pole and fish was caught. Within the next few minute, my grandfather also caught a fish. Felt hungry, we built a fire by the lake and barbecued the fish. It was delicious.
答案：
My grandfather and I enjoy fishing.
went our
After impatient
but was sudden pull at the pole and ∧ a minutes
feeling
barbecued the fish. It was delicious.
高考短文改错 13
013年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试(新课标Ⅱ卷)
The book I’m reading of talks about afternoon tea in Britain. It is said to have started in the early 1800’s. Have tea in the late agternoon provides a bridge between lunch and dinner, that might not be served until 8 o’clock at night. This custom soon becomes another meal of day. Interesting, it had a connection by the British porcelain(瓷器) industry. Tea in China was traditionally drank from cupswithout handles. When tea got popular in Britain, there was a crying need for good cup with handles to suit British habits. This made for the grow in the porcelain industry.
答案：1.of去掉 2.Have—Having 3.that---which 4.becomes---become 5.day前加the
6.Interesting---Interestingly 7.by---with/to 8.drank—drunk 9.cup—cups
10.grow—growth
高考短文改错 14
2013年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试(新课标Ⅰ卷)
I hardly remember my grandmother. She used to holding me on her knees and sing old songs. I was only four when she passes away. She is just a distant memory for me now.
I remember my grandfather very much. He was tall, with broad shoulder and a beard that turned from black toward gray over the years. He had a deep voice, which set himself apart from others in our small town, he was strong and powerful. In a fact, he even scared my classmates away during they came over to play or do homework with me. However, he was the gentlest man I have never known.
答案： I was only
hold passed
I remember my grandfather very He was tall, with broad and a beard that turned from black
well / clearly shoulders town,∧he was
to / into him and
or do
when ever
